Thesis for paper two

I don't have exact thesis's but I do have three themes and unfinished thesis's that I would like to work off of.
1) Pokemon the video game for Gameboy uses unethical environmental issues such as creatures fighting each other until one is incapacitated for user pleasure.
The thesis statement isn't wordy and it needs help with its structure. Besides the grammatical issues I think this thesis would work well for my paper. I could talk about the users choice of Pokemon creatures sent out to fight one another in a controlled battle area. Many believe this is unethical and mean. I would then talk about the fact that the user uses their creature until it is knocked out or reduced to low health levels.
2) Pokemon the video game for Gameboy uses unethical environmental issues such as taking a creature out of its habitat and placing the creature in a new habitat.
I would talk about the users control to catch a creature in a Pokeball and then move the creature they captured from its natural habitat to an unknown habitat to fight. There are many enviromental issues involved with taking a creature from its habitat. I can talk about the negatives such as niche removal etc.
3)Pokemon the video game for Gameboy uses domestication of creatures which is environmentally unsafe. I can talk about the negatives of domesitcating wild creatures used just to fight. Many critics would agree that it is very unethical and could through the balanced niche off.

These theisis are very vauge and not complete however, I feel I can take these and expand on them in class and make one very good thesis. I have alot of ethical issues I could mention in my paper that I can support with alot of detail.